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12 Feb 2025

Sharon
Hoffmann

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Feb 28th

Jan 29th

Sundays at
Second Baptist

After Robert Hayden’s

Those Winter Sundays

My father – my foster father, who

renamed me Robert – paced restlessly

and looked at his watch again and again,

muttering angrily how late we’d be.


I barely dared to breathe, afraid

he might let loose his wrath on me

rather than my mother at the mirror,

putting on makeup to hide a bruise.


Later, at Second Baptist, well-mannered

and well-dressed, we joined the choir

in singing Softly and Tenderly

we, who had no knowledge of tenderness.

Behind the poem...

I heard about a poetry prompt that invited poets to compose a piece that was ‘after’ in two different senses: firstly, the author’s style and form, and secondly, concerning something that happened just after the action of the original. I chose Robert Hayden’s Those Winter Sundays – a poem that had helped me to understand my own father and his ‘chronic angers’. This led me to learn more about Hayden’s life; about his abusive childhood with foster parents.

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