
12 Feb 2025
Sharon
Hoffmann

Full
Moon
Feb 28th
Jan 29th
Sundays at
Second Baptist
After Robert Hayden’s
Those Winter Sundays
My father – my foster father, who
renamed me Robert – paced restlessly
and looked at his watch again and again,
muttering angrily how late we’d be.
I barely dared to breathe, afraid
he might let loose his wrath on me
rather than my mother at the mirror,
putting on makeup to hide a bruise.
Later, at Second Baptist, well-mannered
and well-dressed, we joined the choir
in singing Softly and Tenderly –
we, who had no knowledge of tenderness.
Behind the poem...
I heard about a poetry prompt that invited poets to compose a piece that was ‘after’ in two different senses: firstly, the author’s style and form, and secondly, concerning something that happened just after the action of the original. I chose Robert Hayden’s Those Winter Sundays – a poem that had helped me to understand my own father and his ‘chronic angers’. This led me to learn more about Hayden’s life; about his abusive childhood with foster parents.